Thursday, April 24, 2008

Scrape the Driveway!

GlamorGirl came home from school the other day with a book she had written. She was so excited about it and couldn't wait for me to read it. As I read it she was looking over my shoulder wanting to know what I thought. Here is her story with spelling and punctuation the way it is...

The mother said to the father scrape the driveway please o please. No I want! (should say won't) please. Scrape the driveway and do what I saw. (say) Scrape the driveway No Way! Now. No. Scrape the driveway. Scrape the driveway? Oh I thot (thought) you said take the trash out I will scrape the driveway Yippee ya.

By GlamorGirl

It's not prefect but I think it is very good for a 1st grader! She almost spelled all the words right and had most of the punctuation. By the way, I laughed at the end when the father says Oh I thought you said take the trash out :) Pretty funny mind that one has but makes me wonder if that is the way her dad and I sound to her?!?! Hmmm

3 comments:

We are THAT Family said...

Tonya, that is so cute. My kids love for me to read what they write. Sometimes I need help with the words- Now, I need to go back and see if their is a double message to any of them!

Terri@SteelMagnolia said...

Email me!!
I wanted to tell you how much fun that Rock Star deal is..
My husband said that was probably THE MOST FUN FAMILY NIGHT he's ever had... they are all addicted to it...

Martie said...

Hahaha, ho ho, hee hee hee! That is hilarious!!

Martie